Skyzm Renegade - Issue 1 script (EDIT)

For those interested, I've finished putting together the script for the first issue of Skyzm: Renegade. As both creator and artist I have the luxury of writing for myself, meaning the only format I need to follow is the one that best suits my own needs. That said, my script does not follow traditional formatting for neither teleplays nor theater. Since I'm Michael Bay on the set, I also get to direct the camera, so forgive me for all the "we" and Hollywood initialisms! I tried to be brief and on target. I hope you enjoy!

Any feedback is appreciated! Thanks!

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Edit: Took 's advice and tried to spread out some of the action. The original script ended the first issue at just 19 pages. The second draft finishes at 25. I've also done an overhaul to Damien's barf-inducing shit speech at the end. It's MUCH better now and he is all the more likable. I actually felt for the guy at the end there!

Well, that's about it, people! Let me know what you think of the edit!



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